Google â€śbusiness email mistakesâ€ť and youâ€™ll find endless resources. But they all say the same thing:
- Include a first name in the email.
- Avoid using business jargon.
- Donâ€™t forget to include a greeting.
- Donâ€™t say â€śto whom it may concern.â€ť
- Make sure you change the subject line.
- Spellcheck your work.
- Avoid emoticons. Â
And the list goes on. But all of these suggestions are common sense; if youâ€™re a business professional today, what are the non-obvious mistakes that are preventing your emails from generatingÂ a response?
Mistake 1: Your subjectÂ line focuses on the wrong goal.
Itâ€™s no secret that an effective subject line is needed to ultimately get an email opened. But when writing these subject lines, think about your true end goal. Â
The goal of any email you send should simply be about getting a response. It shouldnâ€™t be about closing a deal, finalizing a partnership, or hiring a candidate. Until you can get a response on your email, until you can truly connect with your recipient, youâ€™re nowhere closer to your goal.Â
Here are some sampleÂ subject lines weâ€™ve seen work:
- [First Name], quick question for you. Â
- [Mutual connection] recommended I get in touch.
- Ideas for [thing thatâ€™s important to them]. Â
- Question about [recent trigger event]. Â
- Question about [a goal they have]. Â
- Thoughts about [title of their blog post]. Â
- Have you considered [thought / recommendation]?
- Sales email mistake #1: Irrelevant subject line (Tweet This)
- The #1 goal of a #sales email = getting a response (Tweet This)
Mistake 2: You’re sending all your emails at the wrong time.
Most business emails are sent during business hours. But recent data from the 2014 Email Open Rates Report shows something slightly surprising. Â Â
The gray line shows the number of emails sent each day of the week. This line illustrates that most emails were sent on Monday, with over 1,000,000 sent that day. The least amount of emails were sent on Saturday and Sunday, of course, with under 200,000 sent on each of those days.Â But the worst days for open rates are Monday and Tuesday. However, the open rate gradually increases over the course of the week and then spikes on Saturday and Sunday. Â
Now, weâ€™re not saying that you should send all emails on the weekend. But there should be some balance. If youâ€™re looking to really capture the attention of someone important that isnâ€™t getting back to you, try a Sunday night email.Â
- Worst email send days = Monday & Tuesday (Tweet This)
- Best email send days = Saturday & Sunday (Tweet This)
Mistake 3: You’reÂ using a generic sender address.
While many one-to-one emails come from an individual account, you may be using an email service provider to send emails to a larger database. For example, you may be contacting many individuals about a new offer. Or maybe you need to send a new feature update. Whatever the case, the name you include in the â€śFromâ€ť field of your email can have a huge impact on your overall open rates. Thereâ€™s been a number of studies that show sending emails from an actual person increases both the open and clickthrough rates.Â
As you can see in the graph above, the control generated a 0.73% clickthrough rate (CTR), and the treatment generated a 0.96% CTR. With a confidence of 99.9%, there was a clear winner. And it makes sense — recipients feel a more personal connection to your email when they receive it from youÂ than they do from Company X, or worse, some version of â€śdonotreply.com.â€ť
- Sending email from a real person (not generic account) boosts open rate (Tweet This)
- Want people to open your email? Use “From: You,” not “From: Company” (Tweet This)
Editor’s note: This post was originally published in November 2014, and has been updated for accuracy and comprehensiveness.